April 14, 2005

A knock

Oh, the hit on the head
Water in my hand
Did I say wrong
Hurt flows
Is this retribution through the air
The ache remains
Is it all fading away
I’ll never understand I said
Did I mean all that
All is a haze
What has been all day
Some more's been added
Clear me, I’ve confused you
I’ll await your reply

3 Comments:

At 5:42 am, Anonymous Anonymous said...

all your poems and writings here, leaves me with a question mark.....something very different yet the same......they sound so familiar yet so well written....good going dude

 
At 9:19 am, Blogger Kat said...

Thank you for your kind words on my blog. I appreciate them very much. You have lovely poems.

I love "Accross the Seas"

Kat

 
At 8:02 am, Blogger Striped Tree said...

Your poetry is beautiful. I have always dreamed of being able to express myself through poetry, but it has never been my strong suit. You do a wondderful job.
Thank you for the encouraging words you posted on my blog.

 

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